Have had some feedback. Didn't realise the 30 minutes at the next meeting was for the final discussions. Let's see if we can make that happen!

Ok I had three things: pets, parking and commitment

Pets: sounds as if a tweak of the wording so people can't say 'oh well I always intended to have a pet'?

Parking: the way the wording is now if we do what we plan and get a park in the yard and seldom use it every 48 hours we need to go and move it. bags I get to be parking warden and have chalk!

Commitment: initially think the wording was that we all had to help with everything? And definitely the wording about meals was something like eating en masse was voluntary but everyone had to help prepare meals. So all the stuff about everyone having to commit to do something, apart from attend meetings, and to pay if opting out has disappeared? That ain't gonna work!

Regds roz